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Sarah Allen's avatar

This is one of the best explanations of voice I've ever seen! And now I definitely want Goodnight Moon meets Die Hard.

Julie Falatko's avatar

Ha, yeah, that was one where as soon as I came up with it for my little fake list of possibilities, I was like, "wait...maybe?"

Elayne Crain's avatar

"Die Moon" or "Goodnight Hard" -- either one sounds promising, honestly!

Julie Falatko's avatar

WAIT, SERIOUSLY. I'm surprised no one has written Goodnight Hard yet.

Elayne Crain's avatar

"Psstt...Julie" -- Jiminy Cricket on your shoulder

Julie Falatko's avatar

Gosh darnit Jiminy.

Susan Cabael's avatar

Loving the tips on developing voice. I’m at that stage in one of my manuscripts that’s written, but not yet me.

Julie Falatko's avatar

Good luck! I have been there so many times.

Michele Ziemke's avatar

Best explanation ever!!! As a professional seamstress in my 20’s and 30’s (before becoming an art teacher), sewing for clients was all about making their “camel”. But as I branched out as a designer, that’s when my “camel” was seen and heard —it still had to be something people wanted and needed (like agents and editors in writing) to wear, but fun and unique! Taking a look at some of my flat stories and thinking more in terms of voice to see if a new spark could lead to something fun and unique! I’ve also been playing with a character that wants out of my head, and this is just the fuel I needed.

BTW, if you ever need sewing advice, feel free to ask!

Julie Falatko's avatar

Oh, yeah, this is so interesting, thinking about sewing for someone else and having to create something that works in THEIR voice, using your skills, and then how satisfying it must be to create things in your voice (camel).

A character who wants out of your head is such a great place to be in!

Judy Murdoch's avatar

I really enjoy your distinctive voice Julie. You have really crazy, cool story ideas and you tell those stories in wonderful ways. When I was a kid I fell in love with everything Roald Dahl wrote. He was one of the first children's authors (Dr. Seuss is my other fave) who didn't treat kids like simpletons. I always felt like Roald and Dr. Seuss were winking at me saying "Let's ditch these stuffy adults and make some mischief!"

Ivo Ziskra's avatar

Great article about finding my voice.

Cathy Cultice Lentes's avatar

I didn’t connect with this story’s 🐪

Cathy Cultice Lentes's avatar

I meant to say more before posting…brilliant, Julie! This will be my go to statement from now on.

Julie Falatko's avatar

You've got to have a strong camel!

Mary Rudzinski's avatar

Thanks for this great explanation. Voice is the make or break it thing in any writing!