DTW Q&A 015

Should I change this part of my manuscript that I love?

For today’s Q&A, I’m breaking with convention and answering a question that was asked on another blog. I love Deborah Halverson at Dear Editor (and have paid her to edit novel manuscripts! I recommend her!) and last month she answered a question about whether to change a pesky part of a picture book manuscript that the question asker suspected was the r…